MadHatterGraphix 1,258 Posted March 17, 2014 I just designed this t-shirt and want to know what can improve on it or should it just stay? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xpaperman 719 Posted March 17, 2014 The only thing I can see to make this better would be swapping cars to a '69 Charger! But that's just me 3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadHatterGraphix 1,258 Posted March 17, 2014 That wont happen, ZombieGTO is how I wanted it, I was looking more for change colors, change the shape which I did I already I hated the straightness or the box. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
security802 686 Posted March 17, 2014 Make the edges of the circle more ragged 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaybyrd 3,770 Posted March 17, 2014 Maybe a Fairlane. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
skarekrow 1,842 Posted March 17, 2014 +1 on the ragged edges. Otherwise, I like it... GTO & all! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wildgoose 4,200 Posted March 17, 2014 I like it. The only thing on the round one is the zombie is missing, I kinda liked that element. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jay2703 704 Posted March 17, 2014 The only thing I can see to make this better would be swapping cars to a '69 Charger! But that's just me My first car was a '69 Charger with a 440. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Coaster36 327 Posted March 17, 2014 I like the zombie in it as well. Its subtle but important. I would shrink the car a tad and then replace that tree on the far right with the zombie. Im not fond of the "fog" you did. It makes it look washed out or faded. Im not sure what to do besides just make the whole thing darker. Like its night time. I dont know if its possible but can do a black fade around the whole circle so it fades into the shirt? If thats not possible Id vote for jagged edges. Like a torn picture. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadHatterGraphix 1,258 Posted March 17, 2014 I did some changes looking for comments. I couldn't get the edges to jag right or fade out right so I came up with this. 4 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadHatterGraphix 1,258 Posted March 17, 2014 Or this one? 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaybyrd 3,770 Posted March 17, 2014 I prefer the effect on the tombstone one myself. 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
security802 686 Posted March 17, 2014 I prefer the effect on the tombstone one myself. X2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadHatterGraphix 1,258 Posted March 17, 2014 I'm leaning towards the tombstone one myself. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaybyrd 3,770 Posted March 17, 2014 I'm leaning towards the tombstone one myself. I always knew you had good taste Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadHatterGraphix 1,258 Posted March 17, 2014 I always knew you had good taste Of course I do I have you as a friend lol 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
outlaws 102 Posted March 17, 2014 Tombstone one is awesome! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadHatterGraphix 1,258 Posted March 17, 2014 Tombstone one is awesome! Thanks Outlaws Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mfatty500 454 Posted March 17, 2014 Who is this to marketed towards? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MadHatterGraphix 1,258 Posted March 17, 2014 For some reason Gothic people like this stuff I have done some dark t-shirts and they love them. People who love Halloween yr round. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaybyrd 3,770 Posted March 18, 2014 No black nails or hair here (hardly any hair actually) and I'd wear it but I've been into the zombie movie stuff as long as I can remember. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
3Rivers 0 Posted March 21, 2014 The GTO is awesome..shirt too! Tomb stone.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites