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I have had this design idea in my head for a long time now and put it to the test tonight. I may tweak it a bit more and possibly add some text. What do you guys/gals think? Don't be shy...

 

Also what do I need to do to the file in order to post it here? Thank you.

 

 

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"More Reply Options" bottom right of your screen.

"Attach Files" bottom of Reply box.

Browse and Attach your file,

"Add Reply" button.

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It's hard to form much opinion at this point... Needs a catch-phrase.

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I'm trying to like it, its I don't know maybe its something that shouldn't be messed with a pink ribbon or any of the ribbons that represent causes. To me its disrespectful towards breast cancer patients.

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I cut it and don't care for it myself. The flames on the top are throwing it off. I may try smaller flames tomorrow to match the bottom or leave them out.

 

*********** My wife and I both lost our Mothers to breast cancer a few years ago so NO disrespect here! The whole reason I am working with the ribbon is to bring more attention to breast cancer awareness for our next fundraiser.....Proceeds go to research and victims. Nuff said

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Someone is always going to find something disrespectful somehow.

They have ribbons for all different causes....maybe this one with flames could be for firemen!! There is a POW/MIA one that is black and white...theres the pink breast cancer one, theres a red one..cant remember what thats for.

If i am not mistaken, the first original ribbon was a yellow one for our troops! So all others are just modifications and copies off that..which in a way can be seen as disrespectful too!

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As for the flames out the bottom..maybe make them go upward..make them cutout inside the ribbon..know what i mean?

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I personally like it.. People get offended all the time over stuff that is not that big of a deal..If the proceeds go to research than by all means cut it and sell it...  Very nice design in my opinion..

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Yes, removing the flames at the top and turning the bottom one's inward are an improvement.

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Still needs to say something. Perhaps that's at the heart of the problem...

There's no clear message or meaning to the graphic.

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