WHIT72 36 Posted July 24, 2013 Hey guys need some constructive criticism. Designed a new logo, now that is getting busier wanted something more creative. I've been staring at it for a few days and need some outside opinions. I think the mouse needs some color? Thanks. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
canuck1 6 Posted July 24, 2013 I like it. I am undecided if the mouse needs color. Do the white areas show the color of the background? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WHIT72 36 Posted July 24, 2013 Yeah the mouse, 959 and custom vinyl graphics will be the color of the background. I'm a tweaker I can't leave anything alone. My wifes says to leave it alone, she likes it that way. I just need some professional opinions. Thanks Canuck Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
canuck1 6 Posted July 24, 2013 OK...well if you are looking for professional opinions..."I'm out"........ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WHIT72 36 Posted July 24, 2013 I've seen some your work. Very professional Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jay2703 704 Posted July 24, 2013 I like it how it is. Simple and easy to read. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mabscotthandyman 1,410 Posted July 24, 2013 Looks nice like it is Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WHIT72 36 Posted July 24, 2013 Oh God so my wife was right, I'll keep that to myself ha ha Thanks guys Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
plbrooks 13 Posted July 24, 2013 I like it!! Nice job. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
slice&dice 2,450 Posted July 24, 2013 Very cool, if I had to mention something, it would be the "5" which looks like an S. I'll bet that a slight adjustment of the nodes in that will get it looking more like a 5. I didn't realize that was a mouse, and was wondering about it, until canuck tipped me off. My mouse looks like THIS -- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
plbrooks 13 Posted July 24, 2013 A quick look at that mouse looks like a stingray... cool!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BannerJohn 1,324 Posted July 24, 2013 Very cool, if I had to mention something, it would be the "5" which looks like an S.I'll bet that a slight adjustment of the nodes in that will get it looking more like a 5. I didn't realize that was a mouse, and was wondering about it, until canuck tipped me off. My mouse looks like THIS -- I agree on the '5' Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RickS 39 Posted July 24, 2013 I also agree on the "5" it wouldn't take much editing, also you might try and see what a small cord added to the mouse would look like. just a short squiggly line, and if the size looked wrong, you could shorten up the back half of the mouse so as to not get things too large. just a thought. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WHIT72 36 Posted July 24, 2013 Great suggestions, yeah I definitely need to fix the five, I'm going to try the chord on the mouse. Thanks guys As usual great feed back. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sleeveofwizzard 104 Posted July 24, 2013 I think it looks pretty good. If it were me I would lose the mouse all together but that is just personal preference and not an educated advertising tip (I aint edumacated). 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dirttrackin280h 33 Posted July 24, 2013 Looks good. As others have said, try adding a cord to the mouse. At first glance I thought it was a football! I think I might have to agree with Ted S, by loosing the mouse all together. But hell, I'm not edumacated either. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WHIT72 36 Posted July 25, 2013 Yeah I'm working on a chord now, and I did the five over, I'll post it when I finish it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chamm 3 Posted July 29, 2013 My first impression was that the word grahipx was hard to make out quickly. I thought the mouse was a shoe at first, like a flip flop sandal. Now that I know its a mouse, and after looking at more closely I see it is a mouse. Maybe adding a cord would help. Maybe changing it to something else. Either way I do like the entire logo. I Do agree on cleaning up the five also. Over all, I like it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites