ropie 47 Posted May 13, 2014 Looking for some suggestions to make this 'pop' This is what was given to me (recreated in AI) Thanks for any help you master can provide! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bgsnydermd 2 Posted May 13, 2014 I would make everything smaller. Give the logo more breathing room. It looks like you crammed it in there. Use that negative space! And then make the number smaller to suit. Also, make "Hours" bold. That will be one of the most common things people look for so bolding it (and make it a little smaller) will help establish some hierarchy. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Arcbeat 19 Posted May 13, 2014 The font size look to bigger, downsize it a lil bit. Let it get some air. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
slice&dice 2,451 Posted May 13, 2014 I don't believe that "walk-ins" should have an apostrophe (normally it appears with a hyphen between the two words) Also, I see no need for the red dot after "SPOT" And for some reason, I keep reading it as "SPOUT" --- maybe move the handle a bit so it appears more like an O and isn't so tilted. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kylesmash 36 Posted May 15, 2014 I agree "the haircut spot should be smaller. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites