C Lewis 6 Posted November 7, 2008 Here are two logos I started today. He has two companies & wants the artwork to match. The wave I sketched on paper, scanned & reproduced in IllustratorCs. would love to hear your thoughts..... Blessed Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tory 0 Posted November 7, 2008 Core, double check the spelling for "stained glass" I like the logo, but something is bothering my eyes. Maybe the way the lettering is also waved? Especially the bottom lettering, waves in glass. I like the wave but would like to see the foam reversed with the drips going down not up. I know it may seem critical but I really do like it but those elements bother my eyes. Perhaps it is just me?? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
C Lewis 6 Posted November 7, 2008 oops! my bad, lol Thanks for the heads up on the spelling Tory The foam was intended to look as it were moving... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lowone 3 Posted November 7, 2008 Looks awesome core. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
spacegraphics 0 Posted November 7, 2008 It looks awesome, but I think the "waves" in the name are a bit too wavy, it is a bit hard to focus on it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Primal Rage Outdoors 0 Posted November 7, 2008 Core the layout colors look good, but I would have to agree on the waves in the lettering, it actually pulls the viewer away from the graphic, another thought may be to add a little of the foam white to the lettering in the top of "waves" and bottom of" In Glass" this also would give the overall rounding and water effect , would keep the customers focus on the central wave graphic', just a thought, but man the colors to pop on this one ! ??? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Muttley 0 Posted November 7, 2008 Core, Love the work, but the wavy "Waves" wording is a little too wavy. Tone it down a little, and I think it would look better. I would also change the words "stained glass" to look like stained glass and not waves. These two small changes may help you out. Good work! ??? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
richie6 0 Posted November 7, 2008 Looks good. Not sure if I like the wavey font... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Fbomb 0 Posted November 7, 2008 Like everyone says, I'm not crazy about the wavy lettering, but don't hate them. It just seems like a bit much. I like the suggestion to add foam to top and bottom of lettering. The wave is bad ass and should be the focus! Try squaring off the letters on the top design. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
nonabelle 5 Posted November 12, 2008 i like it. nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rhino 0 Posted November 12, 2008 great workup get the spelling corrected then show customer to see if they like the wavy letters ;D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
